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Testing the Submissive: The Story & Confessions of a Masochist Kindle Edition
How far would her Master push her with these ‘tests’? How far would Abigail go? How many times could she stand before him blushing; yet with that unmistakable tingle? Their relationship was surely headed for a collision course. Or was it?
Praise for Testing the Submissive:
"The praise by others on Al Daltrey's work is absolutely accurate; Al Daltrey did not disappoint. The author did an AMAZING job in reflecting Abigail's POV. Although I have read quite a few BDSM books, Testing the Submissive surpasses the others." ~ 5 Stars Coast 2 Coast Book Besties
"The story was very thorough and written with great detail. So much so, it almost puts the reader in the scene with the characters. This is my first time reading a book by AL Daltrey but it certainly won't be my last. Well done." ~ 5 Stars SheLoves2Read
"The author does an incredible job at painting a picture in your mind. He describes everything in vivid detail and nothing is left to the imagination. His writing is clear and keeps the reader enthralled. I would definitely recommend this book!" ~ 4 Stars Bookaholic and More Blog
This story contains STRONG BDSM. While fully consensual, it includes submission, dominance, sadism and masochism. Please do NOT buy or read this if you are offended by graphic sexual descriptions including sexual violence. All characters are aged 25+, and it is recommended for an adult audience ONLY (aged 21+). This story is pure fiction and the author does not condone any violent behavior.
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateJune 3, 2014
- File size593 KB
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- ASIN : B00KRPUC0Q
- Publisher : (June 3, 2014)
- Publication date : June 3, 2014
- Language : English
- File size : 593 KB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 198 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #1,040,620 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #30,420 in BDSM Erotica (Kindle Store)
- #30,994 in BDSM Erotica (Books)
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About the author

My day job requires a fair amount of writing. Therefore, I never really had an interest to write for pleasure. When you do it all day, the last thing you want to do when you get home, is more writing. Meanwhile, as my business career progressed, so did my involvement in the BDSM lifestyle.
This interest in kinky sex started in my University years. Like most men, I loved meeting women, and especially the occasional one who didn't mind being tied up, or blindfolded, or spanked. I've always loved vanilla sex too - but BDSM became the icing on the cake.
During my lifetime I was lucky enough to meet my fair share of submissive women. And don't for a minute think these women were weak. Outside the bedroom they were confident, opinionated, gregarious and self-assured. However, inside the bedroom (so to speak) they wanted to feel the strong firm hand of a dominant man taking complete control.
Eventually I found the perfect partner, and am happily married.
One day, I flipped my laptop open, and to my surprise - I had an urge to write a BDSM story. Soon I had 20 pages, then 40, then 60. The novel that resulted was 'Testing the Submissive'. The response was very positive including excellent reviews. That motivated me to keep writing, and 'A Condo With Two Views' became my second full-length novel. A few other projects are also in the works.
If you decide to read my book(s), I truly hope you enjoy it.
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Customers praise the writing quality, story quality, and heat content of the book. They find the writing depthful and captivating, with an intriguing premise. Many describe the book as raw and erotic, with nice character development. However, some readers feel the book is too harsh and not suitable for the faint of heart.
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Customers appreciate the writing quality. They find the book well-written with depth and passion. The author's skill allows the reader to fully understand each test and its elements. The story is described in loving detail, satisfying their emotional needs.
"...There’s a passion and depth in his writing that allows the reader to fully understand each test and the elements that encompass not just BDSM, but..." Read more
"...One, because it was just written really, really well. This book made me feel things, this book challenged me and what I think about sex and what can..." Read more
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Customers find the story engaging and well-crafted. They appreciate the premise and the love story's development. The author keeps readers hooked from start to finish, challenging their thoughts with an understated romance.
"...This story is pure fiction and the author does not condone any violent behavior...." Read more
"...felt her need to do as Lewis asks and I think that is how the love story is built up. Because I believed it...." Read more
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"...This story was such an eye opening read for me. It dealt with situations I honestly never gave much thought to. And now I am like damn...." Read more
Customers enjoy the book's erotic content. They find it engaging and sensual.
"...This story might be short in length but it certainly does not lack in the heat department. Leave your panties in the drawer when reading this...." Read more
"...But, there are also some very HOT moments as well...." Read more
"...This book is not for the faint at heart. The reward is a HOT read that will leave you enthralled in the beauty of submission...." Read more
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Customers appreciate the book's rawness. They find it rough and authentic in its purest form.
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Customers enjoy the character development. They find the characters well-written, though some feel the characters are dark.
"...The development of the characters was nice as well...." Read more
"...I am very impressed. I love the storyline, the characters, everything about it! The depth that the Author went into Abigail's thoughts...." Read more
"...The book is well written and the characters are Dark indeed, but we get a feeling that there is more to Abigail and Lewis relationship...." Read more
Customers find the book's heart level too harsh and not suitable for everyone.
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"This book was too harsh for me, but I am sure there is an audience out there for it. I lived a sexual D/s life for 8 years...." Read more
"...As the summary disclaimer warns, this book is not for the faint of heart. Consent. Daltrey's tale drives home the importance of it...." Read more
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- Reviewed in the United States on October 3, 2014In a market overflowing with books about BDSM and erotica these days, I asked myself how different could Testing the Submissive really be? I had just come off reading another author’s debut novel about similar subject matter and was hesitant about even starting this book. I wanted something “different” and not my usual cookie-cutter romantic read. I did a little more research and chatted with some friends who then urged me to read it. I was told it was an absolute fantastic read and I’d love it.
Suddenly, those same people continued telling me to make sure I read the warning at the beginning. Apparently, this book may just be a little too harsh and is not meant for everyone due to the subject matter. You can imagine my surprise when the most unlikely person told me he hoped I was enjoying it and it wasn’t too “harsh.”
Now, normally I’d say if the author suggests his book is “harsh,” I’ve got to find out what he means by this. Well played Al. Well played. I carried on reading and took it all in. You could say Al Daltrey certainly has a way with words.
There’s a passion and depth in his writing that allows the reader to fully understand each test and the elements that encompass not just BDSM, but the Pimp/whore lifestyle as well. The fact that Al wrote this all from a female POV is nothing short of amazing. You can certainly say he delivered the goods and I was kneeling before him after Chapter One saying “Yes Sir. Give me more!”
“He spat in my face. I didn’t recoil. He was testing me. I trusted him. If I couldn’t handle this, I could never handle a whipping at the hands of a sadistic client.”
Every challenge Abby (the submissive in training) is given, Lewis (her “Pimp”) follows up with his inspection of how her body responds to each “test.” I wasn’t sure exactly how to feel about Lewis at first. He was caring and took care of Abby, but there were times where my heart sank for Abby. She wanted to prove herself to Lewis and show him through it all she could make him proud of her. Abby was quickly falling in love with the man who set up her ‘assignments’ to be tested as a true submissive. It just took Lewis a little longer to finally show his own true feelings. I wanted to f**k Lewis one minute and the next I wanted to burn his own skin with hot wax and shove his underwear in his own mouth. But there was never any doubt in my mind, that despite all the situations Lewis was putting Abby through that he’d have his reasons. And that he did.
“Qualities such as honesty and integrity are not taught by bdsm, but by life itself. Same with responsibility and compassion, as ironic as that may sound. As seemingly cruel and sadistic a dominant may appear, there is always a reason, be it pleasure, punishment or purpose.”
I laughed at some of Abby’s inner dialogues especially during her afternoon of speed BJ’s. As I continued on reading about her experiences with Ms. Donovan, Brutus, the ‘subbie pajama party,’ the day in the office and the dungeon I nearly snapped my Kindle in half. There were whips, ties, floggings, paddles and much more that clearly was not intended for the faint of heart (hence the warning at the beginning of the book). This story might be short in length but it certainly does not lack in the heat department. Leave your panties in the drawer when reading this. You won’t be needing those just as Abby certainly never needed hers. Al Daltrey knows how to write scenes that make body parts throb more than his leading lady.
I’m fangirling my freaky ass along for this ride and I’m ready for Al Daltrey’s next book. I will give you a heads up. Testing the Submissive does have a slight cliffhanger and Al’s next book is not the sequel to this. Now Rome wasn’t built in a day and perfection is never delivered overnight. I’m more than willing to wait to see more of Lewis and Abby so long as it means I’m given a book of the same caliber as this. If there is one thing I’ve learned from reading this book it’s be patient and that trust needs to be earned. I’m going to be patient here because I trust that Al will bring his brilliance and knowledge to another masterpiece in due time.
Testing the Submissive was an amazing debut novel and if you are not uncomfortable reading about real forms of BDSM sessions then this is the book for you.
Congratulations to a fellow author and friend. Al you have a great ability to draw readers in and educate those who are still slightly unsure of the lifestyle.
In the interim be sure to check out Al’s blog site www.eroticabdsm.com for more information about the book and the lifestyle.
- Reviewed in the United States on March 15, 2015Wow Testing the Submissive was a different story than what I have read before. I mean I have read BDSM themed books before and love them but, this is the story & confessions of a masochist. Abby (aka Abigail Watson) isn't an ordinary girl she is the masochist in this story. She signs up with Lewis who arranges assignments for her that involve more of the Sadomaschism part of BDSM. I can't say more because I don't want to give away any part of this book.
I did like this book and it definitely has some cringing moments and put me out of my comfort zone at times. But, there are also some very HOT moments as well. So please make sure to READ THE WARNING: And, don't buy the book if you don't like this kind of book.
WARNING: This story contains STRONG BDSM. While fully consensual, it includes submission, dominance, sadism and masochism. Please do NOT buy or read this if you are offended by graphic sexual descriptions including sexual violence. All characters are aged 25+, and it is recommended for an adult audience ONLY (aged 21+). This story is pure fiction and the author does not condone any violent behavior.
I give Testing The Submissive 4.0 stars and I actually purchased this book back in Dec 2014 so it has been on my TBR list for a little while now.
- Reviewed in the United States on January 5, 2015I gave this book 4.5 stars.
This book is an interesting book to write a review for. I have been pondering what I will write about it for about a week. I have been trying to come up with words to explain how it made me feel. I'm probably going to end up rambling about different ways it made me feel and all kinds of things. So bear with me.
Let's get one thing out of the way; heed the author's warning that this has extreme BDSM in it. This is not for the light of heart. But if you have and open mind and love the intense stuff, then stop what you're doing and immediately go buy this book.
Ok... soooo ... This was a good book. For many reasons. One, because it was just written really, really well. This book made me feel things, this book challenged me and what I think about sex and what can turn people on. I read some scenes and was a little appalled; BUT. IN. THE. BEST. WAY!!! Does that make sense? No? Yeah, I know ... this is my struggle. Some of the scenes just made me cringe but you get the understanding of how much Abby enjoys these moments. Abby is an extreme masochist and loves to feel the shame that these moments bring and I think that is one of the best aspects of this book; the way Al Daltrey writes makes you FEEL her shame, but you also feel how she is turned on. Reading this book just made me think more than a usual BDSM book. It takes it one step further and really challenges the reader to question what turns them on. How far would you go to get what you want? Do you understand yourself enough to be comfortable in these situations? Abby is and I love it.
Then there is this romance between Lewis and Abby. It has to be one of the most understated romances in a book ever. You hear so very, very little about them, but dear god, you sure as heck feel the romance building. There are a few scenes where they actually interact through a majority of the book and I was so in-love with their love it was ridiculous. It was wonderful!! Maybe, it is built up with being able to feel how much Abby wants to make Lewis happy and proud. One of the first "tests" that Lewis puts Abby through I almost wanted to cry because I could feel her shame. This was a borderline shame that wasn't something that turned Abby one, hence why it was so sad. But at the same time I felt her need to do as Lewis asks and I think that is how the love story is built up. Because I believed it.
Another aspect of the book is how Al talked about consensual and non-consensual. There are moments where most would be in shock at the accepting behavior in their group, but there is a clear line drawn to show what is not acceptable. I am intrigued with the fact that Mr. Daltrey is a Dominant himself. It gives a different spin on the stories; maybe it makes it seem more realistic. I'm not sure, but I do find it intriguing.
I find this book to be one of the most intense, depraved, sexy, and passionate books I've read. It was a phenomenal way to end 2014 and I cannot wait to read Al Daltrey's second book, A Condo With Two Views, when it comes out. I love a book that asks a lot of me to read and this one didn't disappoint. So be sure to click the purchase links below and enjoy!!
Top reviews from other countries
- Bunny XceteraReviewed in Canada on December 2, 2015
5.0 out of 5 stars Hot flash & wanting more! ;)
If you want Dark erotica... this one wil top your cdake with a fist full of cherries!!! ;) Don't want to be a spoiler but I do hope Al Daltrey will write a second book to this Hot number! WOW!!!
I'm speechless & panting!
- Eliza M. Castillo R.Reviewed in Spain on May 4, 2015
5.0 out of 5 stars AWESOME IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT, IT WAS THE BEST JOURNEY EVER!
The story flows naturally and it's amazing how easily you start with the preface at nine in the morning and in between breaks to eat, you raise your head after reading the E word telling you there is no longer any words left to enjoy, but at the same time being indicative of how thoroughly the story captured your mind and heart to then realize is nine in the evening and you spent a whole day travelling inside a world where there are no worries just the conversation between your imagination's span and an author beyond awesome. ¡Al Daltrey you rock!
- nicole chapmanReviewed in the United Kingdom on September 27, 2014
5.0 out of 5 stars Wow A hot look into the Bdsm world and a 5 star must read: BUT NOT FOR THE FAINT HEARTED
This book takes a very different look into the Bdsm world and is very graphic but I love erotica and Bdsm and this has that and more it adds that romantic touch too and I was hooked I couldn't put it down. It was very graphic and the punishments Abby receives are very harsh but I loved this Pov from a submissive with no holding back on the writing
Along comes Abby looking for pain and pleasure and her master-lewis to sub her out to be his whipping bitch to whoever pays , as he sends her to her first interview which she passes with flying colours makes her so pleased to do whatever and with whoever Lewis sees fit for her to serve, at first it's just business but the more into it she gets the more she wishes it was Lewis doing the whipping and FUCKING. The more interviews she did the more deeper she was falling for Lewis and her submissive behaviour didn't go unnoticed with each interview she did and the descriptions of what happened in every scene she gave him saw her submitting more and more under his control this he enjoyed putting her to the test to see how obedient she could be for him and she was in heaven when he took her on a trip to Paris that's when she fell deeper in love with him,there's nothing she wouldn't do for him but would he fall in love with Abby or keep it strictly business ? This is one author I will be following very closely and the fact that's he's a Dom too makes the story work so well as knew exactly how to put that edge to this book and I can't wait for the next book from Al Daltrey well done Sir.
- ChristinSReviewed in Germany on September 4, 2014
5.0 out of 5 stars Definitely leaves you breathless!
This book comes with a WARNING! It should be taken serious! Read it and read it again and if you aren't offended...then happy reading :) For me the blurb and the warning made the decision easy for me to buy it!
Where to start??? This book left me so needy, so hot, so sweaty. It definitely left a strong impression. I was captivated right from the beginning and left myself asking a lot of times, if I would do it as well.
The way it was written with the episodes was really good and the storyline easy to follow. I loved that it also showed a little everyday life on how to deal with lifestyle.
Would definitely like to read more from Al Daltrey.
- Bri AlvaReviewed in Canada on March 22, 2015
1.0 out of 5 stars One Star
Kind of weird