Summary (Caution – Mild Spoilers Balanced with Extreme Vagueness):
Actaeon of Shore comes to the Pyramid in search of his future. He hopes to establish his profession as one of importance to his people because he sees its value. But others don’t – that’s the first hurdle. What is a capital “E” Engineer? Actaeon must prove what that is to the aristocracy to earn his place. And thus, our hero begins this life journey. The reader tags along as he defeats various threats to the great capital city, houses refugees, prevents invasions and discovers the potential good and evil technology brings to the world of Redemption.
During these many adventures, Actaeon grows from a young man without ties to the owner of his own workshop. He takes on apprentices and employees, extending the benefit of his knowledge. He forges alliances of diplomatic importance by association with his homeland as a consequence of his own good humor and drives for success rather than political gain.
More importantly, Actaeon grows from a young man into a mature adult that is in love with strong values that were not shaped, nor present at the beginning of the book. He falls in love and finds that his entire life shifts as he has to rebalance his own priorities on multiple occasions to better suit these new circumstances. One this is certain: every action is not without consequence.
Overall Response:
First off, I need to address 2 pachyderms currently hanging out with me while I write this review: LitRPG and pacing. Let’s hand pacing the first peanut. This is a long, slow-paced book. The language and pacing are similar to that of the Charles Dickens serial storytelling style. This is not for everyone. It may frustrate some readers, though I think it works well for a book that needs slow, deliberate pacing and language that detaches a reader from the present day. That said, readers should go into the book knowing it is a slow-paced 600 pages broken up into short segments filled with every aspect of life.
Next peanut – the book is LitRPG. As far as I’m aware, this is the first LitRPG book I’ve read. I had to read up on the genre, and previously I boycotted reading Ready Player One because the concept annoyed me. I read more and as it turns out, I definitely did this with Neverwinter Nights as a preteen. If I had skipped the forward, I would have never thought of the book as a “video game” and instead thought of it as fantasy. The details and mechanics of Redemption are built upon in such a way that I would never have known or had to have looked for more information.
The pacing works because this is a modern bildungsroman for a mature audience. The entire overarching story is Actaeon’s life and character growth as he develops his profession and falls in love – then learns what both of those things mean. Life changes and character growth don’t happen overnight, so the speed is realistic. I found myself having epiphanies with the Engineer as he watched his inventions be used for good and evil. There are moments where the most painful tragedy in a scene is the loss of innocence a young adult must face as a result of their own naivety. Who can’t relate to that?
Handshaw approaches serious topics including neurodiversity, politics, religion, love, and death with a sense of humor and the friendly detachment of a fictional setting. ‘The Engineer’ is a deep and thought-provoking read.
On a separate note, I found myself in awe when I realized that this book truly is a love letter. I admit it’s really romantic.
Grammar:
While at times confusing or frustratingly passive, the pace is purposeful. The book meets or exceeds the <1 error/10,000 word industry standard.
LGBTQA+:
There were no major characters that overtly fell into this category. That said, there is a distinct discussion of “otherness” and being separated and outcasted. Additionally, there is a touching coming-out scene for a character experiencing otherness and revealing this to someone they love and trust. Based on the presence of a coming-out scene, otherness, and constant challenging of what gender means, I think this book lands potential inclusion. I would love to hear what others think.
Twilight Zone Moment:
Every book has at least one. There are a couple of strange religious groups that show up in the background and some loose ends from super minor characters that disappear. These aren’t necessarily Twilight Zone Moments so much as odd details that melt into the background without knowing more about the game the book is based on.
Review by Lo Potter Writes
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Reviewed in the United Kingdom on October 10, 2022