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God of Broken Things Paperback – June 11, 2019
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Tyrant magus Edrin Walker destroyed the monster sent by the Skallgrim, but not before it laid waste to Setharis, and infested their magical elite with mind-controlling parasites. Edrin’s own Gift to seize the minds of others was cracked by the strain of battle, and he barely survives the interrogation of a captured magus.
There’s no time for recovery though: a Skallgrim army is marching on the mountain passes of the Clanhold. Edrin and a coterie of villains race to stop them, but the mountains are filled with gods, daemons, magic, and his hideous past. Walker must stop at nothing to win, even if that means losing his mind. Or worse.
- Print length432 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherAngry Robot
- Publication dateJune 11, 2019
- Dimensions5.12 x 0.98 x 7.68 inches
- ISBN-100857668099
- ISBN-13978-0857668097
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“The end result is that Johnston delivers a kick-in-the nuts, edgy, and dark book that excites on every level.”
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“An assured and complex debut novel with a main protagonist of questionable loyalty and morals that, despite yourself, you can’t help but love. It’s not often you come across a fresh voice and a fresh take on magic, but The Traitor God gives both. Moments of absolute horror sit cheek by jowl with humour of the blackest kind and some of the monstrous creations in this book are nauseatingly wonderful. After a slightly slow start I found it increasingly difficult to put this book down. I dearly hope we get to see more of Magus Edrin Walker in future books.”
—Anna Stephens, author of Godblind
“From the frantic opening page, The Traitor God grabs you and doesn’t let go. Facing Gods, monsters, and a magic elite that wants him dead, Edrin Walker’s return to Setharis is a noirish romp packed with action and laced with black humour, and marks Cameron Johnston as a real name to watch in the epic fantasy genre.”
—Neil Williamson, author of The Moon King
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God of Broken Things
By Cameron JohnstonWatkins Media Ltd
Copyright © 2019 Cameron JohnstonAll rights reserved.
ISBN: 978-0-85766-809-7
CHAPTER 1
From the shadows of a doorway, I watched as Vivienne of House Adair – a middling House of waning influence – exited the rear of the building after a midnight tryst with her lover, a married warden captain. The hood of her cloak was up and her cheeks still flushed as she made her way down the back streets of the Crescent, intent on returning to the Old Town before her own husband became aware she was otherwise engaged. To my magically Gifted senses her unguarded mind radiated the fuzzy warmth of a lust well-satisfied.
If she was still fully human then she could spread her legs for whomever she liked; it was none of my business. But if she was infested with the same parasitic creatures that had dominated the traitor Heinreich and almost succeeded in destroying the city, then that unwitting warden was a source of information to use against us, and that was most certainly my business.
She was the least dangerous of the three magi I had marked as likely threats, an artificer more at home with her arcane apparatus of cogs and crystals than with battle. As a young and indifferent pyromancer blessed only with a truly extraordinary memory, her Gift would be weaker than mine by normal standards, but since I'd bathed in the blood of gods some of their potency had seeped into me and it would prove no contest unless I was foolish. Always a risk of that of course. Vivienne's knowledge of architecture and alchemy was what made her dangerous – and a likely partner in bringing down the Templarum Magestus. The Arcanum's seers had divined a number of unknown magi had collaborated in that betrayal and if you needed a magus to circumvent protective wardings and magic-strengthened stone then an artificer would be the obvious choice.
Those soaring spires at the heart of Setharis had fallen – and I was here to ensure that all involved paid a terrible price for their treachery.
I stepped out of the shadows to block her path, "Hello, Vivienne."
She started and loosed a little yelp. "Who–" The blood drained from her face as she realised who stood before her. Her Gift flew open and drew in magic, ready to fight even as her mental defences slammed shut on me. She straightened her back and stared me in the eye. "Edrin Walker. What are you doing lurking in the shadows? Up to no good I warrant."
Ah, it never got old hearing my name said like a curse. The stories told about what I'd done a few months ago had bubbled up like a blocked sewer, and every bit as foul. None of them came close to the truth. I fumbled a bent roll-up from my pouch to my lips, the last tabac to be found anywhere in the city. "Couldn't trouble you for a light could I?"
Her lips thinned and the end of my roll-up flared bright for a second, hotter than was necessary – a clear warning. I took a long drag and blew out acrid smoke. "What do I want?" I probed her defences, searching for any hint of wrongness, of anything other. "Tell me, Vivienne, are you still loyal to Setharis?"
She swallowed. Her hands trembling as her façade of strength cracked. She had probably leapt to the conclusion that I meant to blackmail her about her dalliances with men other than her husband. That was the last thing I cared about.
The cracks in her confidence let my Gift slip in. If I'd wanted to I could have torn her mind open and taken what I wanted. With Councillor Cillian's sealed writ giving me leave to do as I wished it wouldn't even get me killed once people found out. Tempting. So very tempting.
"What do you want?" She spat. "Gold?"
"Hardly," I replied. "I want to know about Heinreich. Tell me what you built for that traitorous cur."
She lurched back, forced to lean a hand on a wall to steady herself, doubled over, throat spasming and threatening to vomit. Her mind crumpled in on itself, oozing guilt.
"Did you think nobody would ever find out? Somebody always talks, even if you pay them off." Her workshop apprentices had suddenly become flush with coin and hadn't been shy in spending it. They hadn't spilled their guts willingly but I can be ever so persuasive.
She choked back a retch. "I ... I had no idea. Heinreich was so nice, so ... charming. How could I ever suspect what he ... It was not my fault."
I stabbed into her mind, making her gasp with shock, and waited for a response to what I was about to say.
"Scarrabus."
Nothing. The name evoked no sudden firing of thought and fear. She had never heard the name before. Her mind ran clear of those creature's parasitic taint. She was no traitor, just another dupe.
She mustered enough bravery to look me in the eye again. "Are you here to kill me? If so, just get on with it."
Oh, I wanted to. Hundreds died when the Templarum Magestus was brought down, and it couldn't have been done without the help of her and others like her. My right hand clenched, itching to dig into her throat and rip it out. Instead I sighed and let my anger drain away. She was hardly the first or finest he had fooled. My mind's eye flicked back to Eva, her face frozen in shock as somebody she had once considered a friend turned his flames on her. Yes, that twisted wretch had fooled the best of us.
I grimaced as I forced my stiff hand to open. "Not today." I raked fingers through my mop of hair. "You will drag your sorry arse over to Councillor Cillian in the morning and detail exactly what you built for that bastard. Don't dare try to leave the city." My lips twisted into a vicious grin that suggested I really hoped she'd try. "I've been given a writ that says I can do whatever I sodding want with you." People were always more than willing to think the worst of me and her own imagination would supply horrific images of the very worst tortures, personalised just for her. Cillian would roast me over hot coals if I stepped too far over the line however, and others would also likely be far from happy with me, the kind of displeased that kept assassins in ale money.
Vivienne shuddered, then took several deep breaths and calmed as her training slid a measure of control back in place. She nodded, and if anything looked relieved that her dark secret had finally been exposed.
I didn't have time to interrogate her further, not tonight. "Go home to your family. You may yet escape this mess with your hide intact." I turned to leave.
"I'm so sorry," she said in a small, tortured voice. "It's been eating me alive ... I just, I needed to forget. Just for a while. I was such a fool to resurrect that madman Tannar's designs. Those alchemic bombs should never have been built."
The last smoke in this whole sodding city almost fell from my lips. "Bombs? Plural? You built more than one?" I spun back. "What do you–"
A flare of killing intent sent me diving and rolling. The cobbles where I had stood erupted into jagged spears of stone that punched Vivienne from her feet and turned her into a human pincushion. Spikes through her heart and skull gave her a mercifully quick death. She hung suspended in the air, hot blood steaming down the winter-cold stone that had killed her.
Shite. Tonight was not going to go my way ...
CHAPTER 2Nine hours earlier, I'd been surrounded by armed men and escorted to the Collegiate of the Arcanum for an urgent meeting with one of most important magi in the city. As usual, important people made you sit on an uncomfortable seat and wait an age for an audience, but at least I wasn't suffering alone.
After a while the sound of screaming becomes white noise, a buzzing annoyance in the back of your head no worse than a yapping dog or a drunkard's droning snore from the straw pallet right next to your own. I yawned, ignored the two armed wardens flanking me, and shifted on the hard wooden bench as I stared at the iron-bound doors in front of me. My eyes traced and re-traced the all-too familiar patterns of glimmering arcane wards worked into the oak. The Forging Room was far from my favourite place in the Collegiate, not least because I had been through this particular magical rite myself as an initiate. All magi had but nobody remembers it all, just the agony and the raw-throated screaming. And the needles, we mustn't forget the needles.
Inserted under the nails ... slid into the eyes ... piercing the tongue ... the other bits ...
I crossed my legs and pulled my great coat tight around me. I hated the bloody Arcanum – their brutal rules and rites had broken my old friend Lynas. He had never been the same afterwards. How dare they put innocent initiates through this! And yet ... I now understood and acknowledged the necessity of magically enforcing loyalty to Setharis. You can't begin turning people into living weapons and let them do anything they wish without a measure of control. After the catastrophe three months ago that we now called the Black Autumn, there could be no denying it. It didn't mean I liked it.
The door to the Forging Room finally creaked open and I sat up straight, wincing as my spine complained. Pain was now my constant companion.
A young magus poked her head out. Her chestnut hair was pulled into a neat tail and she wore plain brown robes entirely lacking the ornamentation and wealth worn by most others – the dark stains marked her as a healing magus of the Halcyon Order. Once their robes had been pure white, but now they all wore cheap robes of a more practical brown. Me, I couldn't stand robes and the status they proclaimed. Plain old peasant tunic and trousers had always suited me just fine.
Her eyes were wide and nervous. "Councillor Cillian bids you enter, magus." She swiftly stepped back to make way for me. There was no sneaking about as an unknown face for me these days – every fucker and their horse seemed to know who and what I was. I suppose that's what happens when you kill a god and save a city. Most seemed to doubt it was true that Nathair, the Thief of Life, had died at my hands, but many magi had heard enough rumours to make them nervous in my presence. And as for those that actually knew the truth of my part in it all, well, who could blame them for being afraid.
The sour stench of blood, sweat and piss mixed with vinegar assaulted me as I stepped inside, almost overpowering a sharp clean scent reminiscent of the aftermath of a lightning storm. Behind a wooden privacy screen, the room was ornate and bewilderingly complex. Copper pipes and bundles of golden wire covered one entire wall, humming with power like a hive of angry bees. Trapped inside glass jars, lightning crackled and spat. Brass cogs ticked and turned with mesmerising regularity. Five artificers wearing odd ceramic gauntlets sat studying arrays of glowing crystals and moving rods that flickered and dancing in tune with whatever was happening to the poor naked git strapped to the table in the centre of the room. To me it was all just pretty lights.
Steel manacles bound the young Gifted initiate's limbs to the table and leather straps held his head and body immobile for his own safety. His head was circled by an open helmet containing an array of needles, some of which were already embedded in his skull, connected to wires running back into the arcane machinery on the wall. A steel grate was situated directly below the table to deal with the subject pissing themselves from fear and pain. I shuddered, remembering that particular bit of humiliation only too well, and that was only a herald of far worse to come.
Cillian's demeanour was unusually severe today as she bent over the initiate and slid another needle in, this time into his chest and heart. She attached it to a wire and stepped back. The nearest artificer nudged a lever up slightly. The boy convulsed and screamed as magic I knew nothing about poured into him.
I winced, his panic and pain seeping into my mind through my cracked Gift. I couldn't keep the thoughts of others out entirely anymore, not after what I'd been through. The buzzing machinery gave off a whiff of magic that smelled reminiscent of my own. Not entirely surprising since all this weird and unsettling machinery was designed to do one thing – to burn loyalty to Setharis and the Arcanum into a Gifted mind. It was a relic built at the very founding of the Arcanum in the years following the destruction of ancient Escharr. Those refugee magi had created it using long lost knowledge for unknown reasons, and I had to wonder if this was one path of knowledge that they had purposely let fade away.
The initiate's eyes rolled to me, pleading to make it stop. Tears wet his cheeks.
"Ah, Edrin," Cillian said. "I am glad my messengers finally found you." I always forgot how tall she was, and how beautiful. She was wearing her formal azure silken robes and an elegant gold circlet to restrain her unruly mass of long dark curly hair. Her pale olive skin appeared sallow and waxy from exhaustion. Knowing her she hadn't stopped for more than a short nap every night for three months solid.
I eyed the torture table; there was no other suitable word for it. "Enjoying yourself are we?" Messengers she said! More like a pack of armed wardens hauling me straight to her whether I liked it or not.
She ignored my jibe entirely, which in all fairness is a wise tactic when faced with annoying people like me. Her lips pursed. "It is only a few hours until nightfall. I had not expected it to take quite this long to find you. I assume they checked all the ale houses first, then the brothels ... which were you in?"
"Neither. I was in a hospital."
She looked concerned for a moment, but I was an experienced magus and with magic we didn't have much need for powders and potions and healing in general unless it was from enormous trauma. If it didn't kill me outright I would generally be back on my feet in a ridiculously short time.
"I work there on occasion," I added.
Surprise flickered through her expression, but not as much as I might have expected given my blackened reputation. "Well well. It is good to see you putting your unique talents to use. Speaking of which, I have a task you are especially suited for."
A ruby began blinking in the machinery and she held up a finger. "Do not go anywhere. This may take a while."
She leaned over the delirious, moaning boy and began asking him questions:
"Are you loyal to Setharis and the Arcanum?"
"Would you ever take coin or favours from foreign powers?"
"Would you ever consider using blood sorcery?"
The questioning went on for an age, and whatever the machinery and needles did to him, they seemed to force truthful answers. When they uncovered an answer they approved of an artificer would pull a lever and his body would shudder with crackling energy, leaving him gasping and sobbing. They were burning it into his mind so that betrayal was not something he could ever seriously consider.
Once or twice they came across opinions or inclinations that they did not approve of and an artificer would lean forward to study the instrumentation and then call over to Cillian – who would then get to work inserting needles and applying shocks and pain and magical manipulations until those opinions were bent back toward compliance, then burned into place. I was living proof that it didn't always hold entirely, but then I was messed up in the head in all sorts of ways.
It would have been easier and less painful if I did it for them, but that was not a role I would ever volunteer for, and in any case the Arcanum would never trust a wastrel tyrant like me to make a proper job of it.
Cillian and her machines got to work on keeping away the Worm of Magic, that seduction to use more and more magic until all of your self-control was eaten away and your body and mind were warped into a mere shell for magic itself. My mouth went dry. This part was the worst. "Open your Gift," Cillian said, pressing a wooden rod wrapped in leather between his teeth and securing it there. "Let as much magic as you can flow into you." At this stage in his development nobody knew if the youth's Gift would mature enough to become a full magus, but they enforced their hidebound rules all the same. Better now than too late. When the artificers read certain arcane signs in the machinery they gave the word that the subject's Gift was straining, and then the real agony began. Needles jabbed and bottled lightning sparked into human skin, releasing a stench of burnt hair into the room. The machinery whined as magic poured into the boy's skull to stamp a single message into him: overextending your Gift was a very bad thing. This agony waits for you if you try! He screamed through the gag until blood mixed with the spittle.
My head throbbed from the poor bastard's ordeal, and I turned my back on them to study the walls until Cillian was done torturing him into unconsciousness. The artificer's machines had done their work for the day and I couldn't help but feel sorry for the poor bastard – he had no idea this was only the first of three sessions. In the morning he would be dragged back in kicking and screaming.
(Continues...)Excerpted from God of Broken Things by Cameron Johnston. Copyright © 2019 Cameron Johnston. Excerpted by permission of Watkins Media Ltd.
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- Publication date : June 11, 2019
- Language : English
- Print length : 432 pages
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- Item Weight : 10.8 ounces
- Dimensions : 5.12 x 0.98 x 7.68 inches
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Cameron Johnston is a Scottish writer of fantasy and lives in the city of Glasgow in Scotland. He is a member of the Glasgow Science Fiction Writers' Circle, loves archaeology and mythology, enjoys exploring ancient sites and camping out under the stars.
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Customers enjoy this fantasy book for its lots of twists and turns, with one review highlighting a surprising ending. Moreover, the story receives praise for its well-written adventure and decent humor, while customers appreciate the character development, with one noting the hero's ability to fill voids. Additionally, the book features an intricate world-building system and moves quickly through its narrative.
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Customers enjoy the twists and turns in this book, with one mentioning a surprising ending, and many noting it's a fantastic follow-up to the first book in the series.
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- Reviewed in the United States on August 8, 2019So this review is mostly for the author rather than potential readers although they may get something from this as well. Keep writing. I read a lot of books. Good reads has me at 33 books finished since the beginning of the year. When you read as many books as I do you are constantly running out of new material and often dip into lesser reviewed books and they give you something to read but not much more. This series deserves more 5 stars and more reviews. I will definitely be sending people asking me for book recommendations to this series.
Things I liked
World building - Sanderson level
Magic system - has consequences
Heros - faulted and flawed
Story - follows one single hero (hate the got approach every book seems to be copying)
Story arc - hero actually has to struggle and has a real chance at failure
Lore - short and to the point, no pages of songs to skip or pointless banter between people who don't matter
Things I didn't like so much
Price - I think this is going to be the biggest deterrent for readers like myself. 4$ on a risky book is one thing but 8$+ range is what more established authors are asking.
Length - a bit torn on this. On one hand it is refreshing to read a completed series but I also feel this book had enough world to make into 3-4 books. Hopefully this world will get revisited at some point.
- Reviewed in the United States on June 25, 2019I recently finished Cameron Johnston’s The Traitor God just in time for the second installment, God of Broken Things, to come out. I broke my personal rule not to pre-order things, though that’s mainly for games (looking at you Thi4f!) but it worked out well in this case. Book #2 concludes the story of Edrin Walker in an explosive way. Yep, it’s actually not a trilogy for once.
We begin a couple months after the near-destruction of the city Setharis, and the alien parasite Scarrabus are still infesting certain powerful mages in their scheme to take over. Having saved everyone and killed yet another god in the process, Walker’s been given a reprieve, and must hunt them down. This quickly gives way to a new crisis when an army of Skallgrim warriors enthralled to the invaders begins a march to destroy them. Walker leads a handful of mages who hate him and a hand-picked band of killers and criminals to confront the enemy in a harsh mountain land, where he confronts a few demons from his past, and the real existential scale of the struggle is revealed.
The nice thing about subsequent books in any series is the lack of need for world-building from scratch. The world, characters, and central conceits of the story are already familiar, so we can dive right into the plot. Johnston takes full advantage of this, and the story picks up in what could be the next chapter of the first book. There is still lots of telling though, with several long paragraphs of exposition that could have been more impactful through action. This volume is a slim 312 pages, so there was ample space to do this. I will say that I liked the development of military tactics to incorporate mages, with units formed in a way reminiscent of carrier battle groups.
In this book, the Lovecraftian elements that were set up previously are paid off and then some. It was only at the end of The Traitor God that the true enemies were revealed, and now we are treated, in a few gestalten revelations, to the full cosmic horror of the real fight that our heroes and antiheroes are waging. This perfectly justifies the excessive blood and death that takes place—they’re literally fighting for the universe. This is where Walker’s psychic abilities really take flight, crossing not just minds and distances but whole dimensions. It’s a nice example of taking a given speculative element and stretching it to its utmost in ways the reader never would have expected.
Mirroring this is the slowly unfolding fact that Walker’s internal battle is at least as much of the story. We see him slowly, or not so slowly, succumbing to the siren song of the overpowering magic flowing through his body. The temptation and even the full justification to use it without restraint is always present, and he indeed does on several occasions. We get to see his powers unleashed at last, but always with the ever-present danger of being consumed by it. There’s always something that pulls him back from losing his humanity, and the reader never knows when he’ll give in to it. The parallels with addiction are obvious. Walker is wounded and physically weak for much of the book, and I was reminded—and I know this is reaching back a bit—of Moorcock’s Elric, who uses magic to make up for his physical shortcomings, possessed soul-hungry blade included. But I was annoyed more than once by his very uncharacteristic navel-gazing and virtue-signalling. It’s hard to take a character seriously as a grimdark antihero when he’s wringing his iron-infested hands over microaggressions.
The ending is not entirely unexpected. Nor is the ending after that. But it is quite satisfying, and brings the story to its most perfect possible conclusion. I was thinking there wouldn’t be enough time to wrap things up about 30 pages from the end, but I was happy to be proven wrong. For epic stakes such as these, equally epic battles are a given. But when the true fight is also internal, one must expect a fulfilling ending to be as well, and in this God of Broken Things delivers.
- Reviewed in the United States on September 5, 2020What a great read. This 2 book series is really a lot of fun to read and moves at a good pace. There are lots of twists and turns, so things never happen exactly how you think they might. Edrin and Eva are forever two of my favorite characters now. Cameron didn't fleshed out as many characters as he could have, but these two he did a fantastic job with in both books. Both had really good arcs and growth and I found myself caring very much about what happened them. I would love to see the author do another series where we see what happens after the end of this series.
- Reviewed in the United States on December 24, 2019I read approximately ~100 novels a year but don't tend to leave reviews. I am making a exception for this novel. The plot is tight, the world building intricate and complicating, and the characters full. I read this book in a single night with some wine (this book is certainly dark - both the world and overall gestalt - so I went with a malbec).
Basically, you should read this book if you enjoy complex characters and non-linear plots. I certainly do.
- Reviewed in the United States on October 29, 2024A darker fantasy with humor, gore and redemption.
- Reviewed in the United States on July 5, 2019A solid read, although not particularly inspiring. I finished it in a couple of day. I must say that I liked the first one better, but there you are.
I wonder if this is the end of the series, the second book seems to offer a very definite conclusion -- pretty unusual in a fantasy where the overarching plot can span more than half a dozen book. I suppose I should say kudos to the author not to fall in the pit trap of crunching books for money, (although the low numbers of reviews on amazon may imply that the series is not financially successfully in the first place and hence its premature conclusion.)
In retrospect, I do not know what to make of our tyrant. He seems to be too much of a contradiction, and not in any good sense. Nevertheless, the plot plods on and the Scarrabus are dealt with...
three and a half stars.
- Reviewed in the United States on August 17, 2019This was a great book. I really enjoyed the characters and the flow. The main character is a prick but he is a joy to listen to! My only complaint is that it ended! The only thing that threw me off was how characters talked. Their sentences would run together. I figured it out quickly and it didn't bother me as much as I thought it would. I think it was because I enjoyed the characters and the story. It was easy to place the words with the characters. If it had caused me any issues I would have only given it 4 stars
Top reviews from other countries
- Gerald NunnReviewed in Canada on June 25, 2019
5.0 out of 5 stars Great ending
First off, in this day of series that never end I was quite pleased this is only a two book series. This book sticks the ending in a highly satisfying manner. The character progression was great and I loved how Edrin and Eva were portrayed throughout the series.
Finally the world building was excellent, I would be quite happy to read other stories featuring new characters set in the same world.
- DelboyReviewed in the United Kingdom on August 25, 2023
5.0 out of 5 stars Good story to show that not all stories end and get dragged back in again
Purchased this for personal reading and can say its a worthwhile purchase.
Again....there is a feeling sorry for Edrin that comes across in the story and felt the country\land was beautifully described that you can picture the places.... and that's the art of a storyteller there.... can you see what is written.... and you do feel you can see Edrin.
- Garry in ThailandReviewed in Australia on February 2, 2021
5.0 out of 5 stars Great read
I dont often give a book five stars, but this read kept me enthralled to the end, had to keep reading well into the night to finish.
- Alex StargazerReviewed in the United Kingdom on January 26, 2023
4.0 out of 5 stars Brilliant but flawed
When describing books like these, I often refer to the metaphor of the flawed diamond. The story has a lot of things going for it: it’s addictingly fast-paced, inventive, and has strong stakes. This is a book you read well-past your bedtime because you can’t get enough. The protagonist, too, has grown on me. Edrin Walker is brave, brilliant, and ruthless, and feels more in-tune with his intended anti-hero role than he did in the previous book. Before, the author simply *told* us that Edrin was conflicted and fighting his worst nature; now, we actually get to *see* it.
The problem lies in the details. There are lots of things that don’t quite add up. For example, the geography is unclear. Do the Skallagrim come from the east or the west? If they’re beyond a sea, what the hell was their army doing up in the north? (Did they cross the arctic on foot?) If the bad guy has the power to portal between different parts of the world, why bother trying to get through the mountain passes? And why did the Eldest open a portal to such a far away town (3 days by ship) instead of getting them directly into Setharis? Finally, I understood that the gods of Setharis were keeping the Scarrabus god asleep and chained, but it was never clarified how Nathair got out or why, towards the end of the book, the gods were no longer stuck underground.
Towards the end of the book, we temporarily shift POV to a different character. This was not done well at all. The narration changed from one character to another halfway through a page. Whoever edited this did not do a great job.
Finally, my complaint from the previous book stands: the secondary character development is lacking. We get to see *some* of Eva and Cillian’s personality, but the vast majority of characters are just playthings for the protagonist to use. Once the climax finishes, I felt a little bit cold. The whole point of a story is that once the evil is hopefully defeated, the protagonist has something to return to. Frodo had the Fellowship and the Shire, to give one example from a very well-known book. Edrin has Eva and that’s about it. Even then, the romance between the two characters, or friendship, or whatever you want to call it, steel feels half-baked.
I suspect that though I read through this book extremely quickly, finishing it in less than two days, I won’t be remembering it far down the line. Which is a pity, since it’s a great story told by a talented writer, but one that is missing a special spark.
- megReviewed in Australia on July 23, 2019
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome
I have read both books in this series and what a joy they have been,well done,I even paid full price and they're worth every penny,so read and be prepared for an epic journey.